I miss thoes summer days...

I miss those summer days, where we laid in the hay. When the breeze drifted through our hair and we didn't have a single care. When the sky shone blue and the green grass had dew. The time when we laugh and hug and you teased me around with bugs. When we dance the night away and woke to the chirps of blue jays.  When the world was at peace and our minds were at ease. I missed those those summer days

My, my beautiful queen! Why such a peculiar thing. With long locks of gold. And lips so bold. You are most defiantly a queen.  My, my beautiful queen! Your voice has a gentle ring. So kind and sweet. Much like a treat. You really are meant to be queen! My,my beautiful queen! Your green eyes are a sight to see. So fierce yet kind. A face without lines. Please be our glorious queen. My, my beautiful queen!  So sad you seem to be. Your lover had a stoke. Your heart is broke. Still be our beautiful queen. My, my beautiful queen. Why can you not see? We need you now. Not out with a bow. Stay my beautiful queen. My, my beautiful queen. Whatever could this be. Your lips a part. And a you have a cold heart. Rest now my beautiful queen.

Hi everyone!

Hey, so this is new. I just wanna ask, what do you think of my poems? Is there anything I can fix or do better on them? Comment please!:)